Monday, May 18, 2009

Berries

Take a sip of my Bitter Juice,
just one taste will do it all.
Then lie here next to me,
in my constitutional grave.

1 comment:

  1. whoa. this was...WHOA. it's just like...this is one of my favorite works of yours, Jackie! Like SERIOUSLY. it was very...touching. it was super provoking temptation and the words just stung sourly just as the berries themselves...it's like i can feel the berries in my hands...considering it or not. OMG.
    write more like this, jackie. this was amazing! i'm so JEALOUS. (yes, sin.)

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